Your comments on a poem I finished the other day (20th May ) please?

I thought it was very good.It is an angry poem, but whats wrong with that? Expressing emotion is what a poem should do. People obviously feel the emotion when they read this, that means to me you have succeeded. There are things going on that touch us, some are positive, some negative. Being able to reach inside and express your feelings is a great gift. It does not mean you are angry. I felt it was a positive statement. Your last line says you will not allow negative influences to run your life. Good job keep at it,